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The parlotones edit

The parlotones page is almost right but there should be

  • a redirect from the word "parlotones" to "the parlotones"
  • second the band image is placed incorrectly in the artical

The biography section is a mess edit

Latest comment: 12 years ago4 comments2 people in discussion

It is a random collection of information - mostly about the band's recent/current activities. It is meant to be a chronological history of the band. It should start with how/when/who/where of the band's founding. "Latest releases" should be mentioned last, not first. Roger (talk) 06:43, 19 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

Worse, it seems to be largely a copyvio from http://www.sanjose.com/the-parlotones-the-daylights-farewell-typewriter-e1276501 which seems like a good source, by the way. I cleaned some of it up, and removed the rest of it. 77.248.138.31 (talk) 17:40, 17 July 2011 (UTC)Reply
If you look at the article history you will see it's not a copyvio. In fact it's a reverse copyvio - this article is the original and the sanjose.com site copied it from here without crediting us. (I even recognise some of my own writing on the sanjose.com page.)
Most of the biography section (before you deleted most of it) was created by a single editor in 30 or so edits during the first half of December 2010 - you can see it in the article history. But it was such a huge mess anyway that your deletion is a big improvement. Now we can begin rebuilding the bio properly - in a logical and chronological sequence - while adding proper cites as we go. Roger (talk) 18:35, 17 July 2011 (UTC)Reply
Stuff seems a little hard to find. If you happen to find any decent sources on formation, or actually anything pre-2005 that would be great. Or anything decent other than album reviews actually. Most stuff I find seem to be fluff pieces or press releases. 77.248.138.31 (talk) 20:33, 17 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Article improvement campaign edit

Latest comment: 12 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Who would like to join a concerted effort to improve and expand this article? Roger (talk) 09:06, 4 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Suggestions for improvement edit

I started the improvement process with a new lede and two sections. I believe there need to be a separate discography article and we need to delete the awards and nominations section (no international bands have it, I completed it but it needs to be destroyed).

Here are the headers (and section content) the article should use:

RadioControlledRobot, and Universal Music Group (2005-07) edit

  • story of making radiocontrolledrobots and awards
  • success that follows, signing with UMG
  • tours in Europe and Fujifilm commercial

A World Next Door to Yours, Coca-Cola Dome, and FIFA World Cup (2007-10) edit

  • story of making world next door and awards
  • first band to headline Coca Cola Dome
  • first band to fill Grandwest Arena
  • playing on the world stage
  • FIFA world cup stage and first US tour with Blue October

Stardust Galaxies, Stand Like Giants, and the 3D concert (2010-12) edit

  • making Stardust Galaxies and accolades
  • Mention appearance on idols and use of album
  • making Journey through the shadows and accolades
  • first 3D concert opera
  • opening for coldplay
  • making journey through shadows and accolades
  • mention release of Eavesdropping on the Songs of Whales as acoustic

Stand Like Giants, and leaving for America (2012-14) edit

  • leaving for america
  • making Stand like Giants and accolades
  • Raphael Domalik book and parting ways in 2014

Homecoming, and Antiques & Artefacts (2014-present) edit

  • returning to South Africa
  • releasing Antiques & Artefacts

Take a look Roger.

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