Talk:The Order of Christian Mystics

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Loveroftruth in topic Some issues with this article

Prod clarification edit

The search term "Harriette Augusta Curtiss" using quotes only shows 275 Ghits. ttonyb (talk) 22:21, 22 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Further Ghits edit

The Ghits for "Frank Homer Curtiss" number more than 52000.Loveroftruth (talk) 10:23, 24 December 2010 (UTC) This group published 27 volumes on esoteric spirituality, each book can be referenced on Gbooks. Loveroftruth (talk) 10:23, 24 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Sources edit

Two new references have been added from major encyclopedias published in America (1, 2) being "The Religious Leaders of America, Gale Cengage, 1991" and "Encyclopedia of American Religions, JG Melton, 1978" to improve the notability of this article.

This bio may contain some helpful NPOV pointers: http://www.answers.com/topic/harriette-augusta-curtiss
It may be better to move this article to Harriette Augusta Curtiss and rewrite it accordingly. - Fayenatic (talk) 22:08, 22 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Some issues with this article edit

This article has a lot of issues - here are just a few:

  • The phrase entered transition is a breach of WP:EUPHEMISM - died is the preferred term. Changed accordingly. Loveroftruth (talk) 17:28, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • The phrase divinely inspired is WP:POV. Changed accordingly. Loveroftruth (talk) 17:28, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • The phrase that have come true in a striking manner is also WP:POV. Changed accordingly. Loveroftruth (talk) 17:28, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • The claim that prophecies regarding two world wars, the great depression and the discovery of Pluto is sourced solely to a book published by the subjects - a breach of WP:SELFPUB. A WP:RS confirming the prophecy would be needed to keep the phrasing as it it. Deleted. Loveroftruth (talk) 17:28, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • The claim that It was believed that the world would experience a devastating set of natural disasters and cataclysms, much as we see these today in the natural disasters, earthquakes and tsunamis the world is experiencing. comments on today in a case of WP:OR. Deleted. Loveroftruth (talk) 17:28, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

The article needs some work, including wikifying. Autarch (talk) 02:34, 31 December 2010 (UTC) More external links have been added. Loveroftruth (talk) 17:28, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply