Talk:The Ninja Warriors (1994 video game)/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Cognissonance in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 00:05, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Another one! Cognissonance (talk) 00:05, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • Note [a] should preferably be sourced.
    • Done

Gameplay

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  • side-scrolling beat 'em up WP:SEAOFBLUE Find a way to separate them
    • Done
  • ninja androids WP:SEAOFBLUE ——"——
    • Done
  • The player can moves "move*"
    • Done
  • and the stages are typically linear in one direction and end with a boss Improve flow: "with the stages typically going in a linear direction and ending with a boss"
    • Done

Development and release

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  • some minor censorship, replacing some female Avoid repetition, remove the first "some"
    • Done

Reception

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  • character movesets That written correctly?
    • No I rewrote it to eliminate the word movesets
  • all which help set "all of* which"
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  • but the game is greater than the sum of its parts Clarify: "but that it was greater than the sum of its parts"
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Overall

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No dead refs or high copyvio. Onhold. Cognissonance (talk) 00:52, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Cognissonance: Done. Thanks for yet again another review! TarkusABtalk 21:39, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
@TarkusAB: My pleasure. Thanks for improving smaller articles.   Cognissonance (talk) 21:48, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply