Talk:The Monster Ball Tour/GA2
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Rp0211 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 17:14, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox edit
- No issues
Lead edit
- ...while elements of the canceled tour with West still included in some parts. → Put "were" between "West" and "still"
- Done
- From 2010 and onwards, the revamped shows had a New York theme... → Remove "and" from this phrase
- Done
- Each of them featured Gaga in new outfits, singing songs related to the concept of the segment, and was followed by a video interlude. → Replace "and was" with "as they were"
- Done
- Commentators commended Gaga's singing abilities, theatricality of the show, and sense of style and fashion. → Add "her" between "and" and "sense"
- Done
Background edit
- ...West made a public statement that he would take temporary leave from his recording career due to the media and public reaction towards his outburst during Taylor Swift's acceptance speech... → There is no source listed saying that West "would take temporary leave" from touring because of this
- Done
- Gaga addressed the situation at Billboard's annual Women in Music luncheon, where she cited creative differences as the reason for the tour's cancellation. → No source to support this
- Done
Development edit
- The revamp of the tour were planned from the arena shows... → Change "were" to "was"
- Done
Concert synopsis edit
- ...she wore bondage inspired black leather dress with guns... → Put "a" between "wore" and "bondage"
- Done
Critical response edit
- No issues
Commercial reception edit
- Additional shows were announced, and Semi Precious Weapons will continue on the road with Gaga until the Monster Ball ends. → Change to past tense
Broadcast and recordings edit
- The special has been nominated for five honors at the upcoming 63rd Primetime Emmy Awards:... → Update this information
Opening acts edit
- No issues
Setlist edit
- No issues
Tour dates edit
- No issues
Personnel edit
- No issues
References edit
- References 3, 4, 7, 10-15, 21, 46, 52, 53, 67, 68 → The publisher for MTV is Viacom as indicated at the bottom of the website
- Done
- References 7, 10, 11, 13, 15 → "MTV" should not be italicized
- Done
- Reference 27 → Both "BBC" and "BBC Online" need to be wiki-linked
- Done
- References 49 & 51 → "Billboard" should not be wiki-linked since it has already been mentioned in references
- Done
- Reference 64 → Publisher needed in citation
- Done
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. There are many minor prose issues, as well as citation errors. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or explain why you believe particular items do not affect good article status until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 19:45, 19 June 2012 (UTC)