Talk:The Moms/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:44, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

Overall this is a good article, though I have a couple small concerns:

• You call Colleen "Collen" a couple times; fix those.
• Will Farrell's misspelled in the image caption.
• "IGN contributor Robert Canning gave the episode an 8.7 out of 10 rating saying he liked all the mothers coming back and loved Buzz Aldrin's appearance writing that despite Aldrin not being a great actor "he had enough good lines to overcome this short fall." a comma or two is needed its currently a run-on sentence.
• Sentences that end with quotations should have the period inside the quotes. Namely, some sentence in the second-to-last paragraph and the second-to-last sentence in the article.

These are pretty much all nitpicks though. I'll put it on hold and pass when they're fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:44, 6 September 2010 (UTC)

Actually, after thinking it over I felt putting it on hold for this stuff was too nitpicky, so I just made the fixes myself. It looks good now, so I'm passing this as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 01:08, 7 September 2010 (UTC)