Talk:The Little Mother

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply


I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAGUAR  22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Initial comments

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  • The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article. There is nothing on what critics thought about the film in the lead
  • "The film stars Marie Eline who goes to her mother's employer" - does she have a character name?
  • I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
  • "The artist, a wealthy, good-hearted man, pleased with the child's pluck" - pluck??
  • "The single reel drama, approximately 990 feet long" - always worth converting into metres

Close - promoted

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I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done   JAGUAR  16:36, 20 September 2015 (UTC)Reply