Talk:The Lion and the Rose/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 03:06, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

It's been nearly a month. Have you finished the review? The Optimistic One (talk) 20:44, 9 November 2019 (UTC)

Apologies for the delay. Health and life priorities have been slowing down other things.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Article does not mention that it was a season four episode outside of lead and infobox.

Do we really need to mention that it's in the fourth season again? I don't really know where I should include it. The Optimistic One (talk) 15:08, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

The caption for the lead image suggests the origin of the Purple Wedding name was from the face, but the only source that appears to deal with that claim does not clarify why they call it the Purple Wedding, just that it is.

There could be a source on the web to back up that claim. The Optimistic One (talk) 15:08, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

 Done: Replaced caption. The Optimistic One (talk) 12:15, 17 November 2019 (UTC)

Consider paraphrasing a little more instead of just straight quoting.

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 08:53, 8 December 2019 (UTC)

Multiple awards unsourced.

Image rationale cites the face as being necessary to demonstrate that "The Purple Wedding" comes from the color of his face, but this appears to be OR.

One of the sources is to a Wikipedia article.  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 15:08, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

I'm unsure whether Westeros.org, The Futon Critic, and WinterIsComing are reliable sources.

I really don't know either. The Optimistic One (talk) 15:08, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

I checked them out some and it seems that there's nothing really there. I would recommend replacing them if possible or, failing that, removing the content it is sourcing.

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 20:31, 22 November 2019 (UTC)

Is the notion that the episode is notable for being Martin's last writing job by GRRM found in the sources? If not, remove that claim.

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 20:31, 22 November 2019 (UTC)

@The Optimistic One: Once the source for the WGoAA award is added, I can pass the article. Though I'd still suggest paraphrasing just a wee bit more, I wouldn't fail the article in its current state. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 17:05, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

Unfortunately, I don't have a laptop or desktop at the moment. However, I can help you out with the paraphrasing. The Optimistic One (talk) 19:42, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

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