Talk:The Judge (Millennium)
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:28, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Intro: ""The Judge" begins with a quotation from Moby-Dick, a novel to which it has been compared thematically." Reword into ""The Judge" begins with a quotation from Moby-Dick, a novel that the episode has been compared to thematically."
- Intro: "while fellow guest Ellis made the last of his three appearances here" remove 'here' and add 'in this episode'
- Production: Maybe add that picture of C.C.H. Pounder
- Production: "Both Millennium and Moby-Dick have been described as "a basic conflict between good and evil", both of which were "focused on a then-modern view of the world"" Break into two sentences: "Both Millennium and Moby-Dick have been described as "a basic conflict between good and evil". In addition, both of "focused on a then-modern view of the world".
On a different note. I like your word choices: mete and staid. Cool! On hold for 7 seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 17:49, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks! I think I've seen to the issues you've raised. GRAPPLE X 01:05, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- Awesome work! I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:26, 2 March 2012 (UTC)