Talk:The Invisible Man (film series)/GA1
Latest comment: 9 months ago by Adamstom.97 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 (talk · contribs) 00:35, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I am planning to review this article for GA over the coming days. I am a little concerned about the scope and size of the article so expect to have a discussion about that. - adamstom97 (talk) 00:35, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Sure! This is my first article on a film series, but I'm happy to address anything needed. Andrzejbanas (talk) 01:28, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- After reviewing the article and talk page I think I am happy with the scope of the article though it is still on the smaller size. One big structural thing I do think would make sense would be to include a summary section for each film similar to Mission: Impossible (film series) or Fast & Furious, as long as the details in each one are sourced. If you could look into doing that and let me know, then I will go through any other specific changes I think are needed for the existing content. - adamstom97 (talk) 02:11, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- Great! I was wondering if that was the main major thing you felt was missing. I've added them now. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:05, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- That looks good, thanks. I just have a few more things to address:
- Can you please clarify the timeframe for "any immediate remakes"?
- The sources basically says the same thing. I've tried to re-phrase that to make it less vague. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:22, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- There are also a few typos in the Legacy section where the wrong word or punctuation appears to have been used, can you please do a once-over?
- Tried to give it a bit of a go-over. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:22, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- There are a couple web sources without archives, there is some inconsistency in the names used for sources such as Deadline vs. Deadline Hollywood, and some missing links in sources.
- Think i've clarified this. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:22, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- Let me know when these have been addressed. - adamstom97 (talk) 00:39, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- I think that is all of them @Adamstom.97:. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:22, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- Good work cleaning up those few things, and I appreciate the effort to have a good article about such old films (considering the focus on newer projects that WP:FILM tends to have). I am now happy to
pass this review. Congratulations. - adamstom97 (talk) 22:04, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
- Good work cleaning up those few things, and I appreciate the effort to have a good article about such old films (considering the focus on newer projects that WP:FILM tends to have). I am now happy to
- I think that is all of them @Adamstom.97:. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:22, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
- That looks good, thanks. I just have a few more things to address:
- Great! I was wondering if that was the main major thing you felt was missing. I've added them now. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:05, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- After reviewing the article and talk page I think I am happy with the scope of the article though it is still on the smaller size. One big structural thing I do think would make sense would be to include a summary section for each film similar to Mission: Impossible (film series) or Fast & Furious, as long as the details in each one are sourced. If you could look into doing that and let me know, then I will go through any other specific changes I think are needed for the existing content. - adamstom97 (talk) 02:11, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
