Talk:The Invisible Hand (The Spectacular Spider-Man)/GA1

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Reviewer: Pedro J. the rookie 23:16, 24 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

this artical looks intresting, nice writeing, good images, and looks like ity hgas a good stack of reliable sources, but i will check if it is GA matiral, I will be your reviewer.--Pedro J. the rookie 23:16, 24 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

Images

  • lets start with the images it looks good i will give you a pass on that.
  • only thing is that you put an alt on the images.

Text

  • there is a hee insted of a he in the plot.
  • you use a lot of he in the first paragrah can tou put the name characters.

refrences

  • pass

other

  • the see also section not needed when the link is already in the artical.
  • dhould there be a guest star window as i think that Clancy Brown was a gust star
  • Should it be Dr.otto octavius.

well that is all i have to say about this artical, feel free to review my Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Family Guy cast members/archive1.--Pedro J. the rookie 23:40, 24 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review - I've taken care of all of you're issues now. Cheers, The Flash {talk} 00:01, 25 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

Pass.--Pedro J. the rookie 00:07, 25 October 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks again for the review! :) The Flash {talk} 00:15, 25 October 2009 (UTC)Reply