Talk:The Image of You/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

So we meet again, will do this today. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:24, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Target CD to Compact disc in the infobox
• Add single chronology there for the artist
• "is a song performed by Albanian" → "is a song by Albanian"
• Mention the digital download release too
• Remove wikilink to Emotion, as that is an obvious term
• "The song represented Albania in" → ""The Image of You" represented Albania for"
• "the pre-selection competition Festivali i Këngës with" → "the pre-selection competition, Festivali i Këngës, with" for target to the correct festival
• "twenty four scoring a total of one hundred and six points" → "24, scoring a total of 106 points" per MOS:NUMBERS
• Mention the performance of the song in the lead

 Done

Background and composition

• Start this section off with mentioning who wrote and composed the original song

I want to keep this as in other articles--Lorik17 (talk) 22:07, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

• "In 2003, Anjeza Shahini was" → "In 2003, Shahini was"
• "As part from the competition's rules" → "For following the competition's rules"
• "The singer took part" → "Shahini took part"
• "song "Dua të jem imazhi yt" composed by Edmond Zhulali and written by Agim Doçi" → "song "Dua të jem imazhi yt", composed by Zhulali and written by Doçi"
• Give mention of the CD and 2018 releases in the background para too, since they don't belong in the comp one and mention the labels also
• "Musically, the song is" → "Musically, the latter is"
• Target rhythmic to Rhythm
• Remove wikilink to Emotion
• "in what appears to be a whirlwind" → "in what seems to be a whirlwind" or something similar so the lead and this aren't 100% identical
• Last sentence should have a ref invoked at the end of it

 Done

At Eurovision

Festivali i Këngës

• Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës as you have done that earlier in the body
• "to determine country's participant" → "to determine the country's participant"
• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2004
• "It consisted of two semi-finals" → "The former consisted of two semi-finals"
• "on 18 and 19 December, and the grand final on 20 December 2003" → "on 18 and 19 December 2003, and the grand final on 20 December of that year"
• "in which, Anjeza Shahini was chosen" → "which included Shahini being chosen"
• "represent the country" → "represent Albania"
• Img needs alt text and only to mention the surname Shahini with no wikilink

Istanbul

• Remove the target on 49th edition as that's already been wikilinked to
• Remove wikilink on Istanbul per above
• "on 12 May and the grand final on 15 May 2004" → "on 12 May 2004 and the grand final three days later"
• "to the then-Eurovision rules" → "to the Eurovision rules at the time"
• "except the host country" → "apart from the host country"
• "Spain and the United Kingdom" → "Spain, and the United Kingdom"
• "*"final, although, the top ten" → "final. However, the top ten"
• "performed thirteenth in the semi-final" → "performed 13th in the semi-final"
• "and qualified for the" → "while the country qualified for the"
• "In the grand final, the country" → "In the grand final, Albania"
• "in a field of twenty four with" → "in a field of 24, with"
• Mention the performance was of the song and shouldn't this be mentioned before the 2012 ranking? If keeping it after, add a mention that it was the 2004 performance though. Also, a ref should be cited at the end of the performance's sentence.

 Done

Track listing

• Retitle to Track listings
• You should only use the compilation CD ref for the CD track listing; the other is redundant

 Done

Release history

• Once again, only the refs should be centred; see my fix on "Hear My Plea" to understand how to do this
• Cite the compilation CD source for the first release

 Done

References

• Run the tool to make sure that all of these are archived
• Copyvio score seems very safe
• Ref 2 should cite European Broadcasting Union as the sole publisher
• Target Laut to laut.de on ref 4
• Ref 12 is essentially useless since Hitparade should not be used for the release sourcing that ref 13 verifies; delete the former
• Ref 14 should have "on Apple Music..." removed from the two titles; instead cite the respective publishers as Apple Music (AU) and Apple Music (US)

 Done

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold, nice work and I did notice similarities to "Hear My Plea", take on my tips when writing your articles in the future. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:39, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: I made the changes you've requested.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:20, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

That's good, made a few minor edits myself but now it's ✓ Pass time! --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:13, 8 May 2020 (UTC)