Talk:The Greatest Romance Ever Sold

Latest comment: 7 years ago by CaliforniaDreamsFan in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs) 04:00, 30 September 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello, my name is CaliforniaDreamsFan, and I'll be reviewing your article! Full review coming soon, so stay tuned!  

Infobox edit

  • Remove the reference and just added it to the 'Composition and release' section.

Lead section edit

  • "Several critics found the single reminiscent of his previous studio album, Diamonds and Pearls (1991)." — "Several music critics (link) found the single reminiscent to the work of his previous studio album, Diamonds and Pearls (1991)."
  • Mention the genre of hip-hop and soul in the second paragraph, since its identified in the infobox.
  • Add release year of Rave In2 the Joy Fantastic.

Composition and release edit

Reception edit

  • I would just merge the critical reception and commercial performance together, since they both feature very few sentences.
  • Add a consensus of the critical analysis of the single; e.g., The track received positive reviews from music critics.
  • Everything else is good!

Track listing and formats edit

  • "United States" — "US"
  • "Spain" — "Spanish"

Credits and personnel edit

  • Any details of its recording/mixing/production whereabouts, other credits, etc.
  • Actually that is all that is listed in the liner notes. Carbrera (talk) 22:21, 30 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Overall GA conclusion edit

A really good article! On hold for 7 days for additional editing. Please ping me for any inquires or when you have finished! Good luck   CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:00, 30 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

@CaliforniaDreamsFan: All done! Thanks so much! Carbrera (talk) 22:21, 30 September 2016 (UTC)Reply
Passing!   CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 03:54, 1 October 2016 (UTC)Reply