Talk:The Grand Babylon Hotel

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kenixkil in topic Story

Serious grammatical problems edit

The narrative in this article switches randomly between past and present. Needs fixing. 212.159.59.5 (talk) 19:11, 25 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

It is also overly detailed and cuts off suddenly.Saxophobia (talk) 15:59, 3 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

Story edit