Talk:The Flying Grass Carpet

I am trying hard to fix the article at the moment. I have made this page to tell something about this big dutch art project and this was not written as commercial article.

Hi. I suggest what you do is look for some reliable references (see WP:RS) which attest to the notability of the project (see WP:N) - what we need is to see it being covered in some depth by multiple independent sources. -- Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 12:24, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

I have removed the speedy deletion tag. The article needs a major rewrite to introduce the subject as an art project investigating the concept of space and the creation of temporary leisure spaces. As written now, it sounds like an ad, but I think there is potential for a significant artwork description, if reliable sources can be provided. WikiDan61^ChatMe!_ReadMe!! 12:27, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for the suggestion. Do I just have to add the sources to the page? —Preceding unsigned comment added by TFGC (talk • contribs) 12:28, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

Adding sources would be a good start. If you can add the sources than other editors can rewrite the contents of the article based on the information in the sources. WikiDan61^ChatMe!_ReadMe!! 12:35, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

I've addaed a few sources following a very quick Google search. Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 12:37, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the help! —Preceding unsigned comment added by TFGC (talk • contribs) 12:42, 27 October 2010 (UTC) What more can I do to remove the message on top of the page? —Preceding unsigned comment added by TFGC (talk • contribs) 08:13, 1 November 2010 (UTC)