Talk:The Fight Before Christmas (The Simpsons)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SCB '92 (talk · contribs) 12:03, 8 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Looks fine, just a few flaws though

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    "falls to sleep" should be changed to "falls asleep", and there should be a "to" so to read "Martha Stewart asking for her help to save the family's Christmas"
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    okay
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    good
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    fine
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    no problems here
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    I really think there should be a screenshot of the episode in the infobox; it might be absent because of the limit reached of using non-free images in the article, but still
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    It'd be harsh to fail this article, so I'm passing it
    I fixed the problems. Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 16:34, 8 November 2011 (UTC)Reply