Talk:The Field Where I Died

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:14, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Glad to see you working on The X-Files again. Well done! TBrandley 18:24, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• "aired" clarify that it is its original airing
• Only have Monster-of-the-Week linked itself, without the outside "" quote marks
• Only Fox should be linked, without network
• "The episode", then the next sentence uses "This episode". Change "This episode" to "It"
• "clearly details" clearly doesn't represent a neutral point of view. Remove, unless a reliable source can be found stating so.
• "of their series" can explain what type of show that is, assuming that the person reading this article doesn't click on that link?
• ""The Field Where I Died" received mixed to positive reviews from television critics. Many praised the episode's exploration of loss and grief as well as Cloke's acting." Merge all that into one, perhaps?
• Per WP:TVPLOT, maybe some none important details can be cut down, it should be "200 to 500 words", but I'm not sure what it is there in plot section
• "anonymous caller" that whole sentence confuses me, his name is "Sydney", so how can he be "anonymous"?
• "Assistant Director" Director shouldn't be in capitals, as per MOS:CAPS
• "Mulder and Scully question Ephesian", the next sentence also uses "question", can something different be found, as it being used so close isn't idealiy
• Link President of the United States per WP:UNDERLINK
• "says" could be changed to "claimed" or something, sometimes
• "the Smoking Man" to "The Smoking Man", with capitals, for MOS:CAPS, as that is his "character" name
• "appears" is that neutral, or is that opinion, from this sentence "it appears that Melissa is his soulmate who is always separated from him"
• "created" to "developed"
• "Eighteen" should be "18" per WP:MOSNUM
• "only to find" remove only per WP:NPOV
• "premiered" to "originally aired"
• "extremely negative" remove extremely per WP:NPOV
• Wasn't the consensus for The X-Files Wiki link to say "The X-Files Wiki" instead of just "The X-Files"?
• Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

Overall; good job. Once the above concerns are addressed, I'll pass the article based on the good article criteria. Cheers, TBrandley 18:24, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

OK, I believe I've fixed all the issues you brought up. Thanks for reviewing this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:33, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

No problem, I'll pass the article now. TBrandley 20:02, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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The Smoking Man was born in Aug 1940 so an appearance at the Warsaw ghetto is cutting it fine. Tennessee was in the Confederacy, Sarah spoke with a Dixie accent, Sullivan wore a Confederate uniform so how could they be "Union" troops? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.125.18.210 (talk) 15:45, 8 August 2016 (UTC)