Talk:The Face (EP)

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:39, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:39, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

Awesome! editorEهեইдအ😎 21:55, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Flawless.

Lead

• Should mention the single and it's composition.
  • The composition is already mentioned in the lead: "The four-track record, which contains musical styles of balearic beat, UK Garage, dubstep and techno" editorEهեইдအ😎 21:30, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• "The Face garnered critical acclaim" → should mention some quotes from reviewers, comparing styles of the EP to to other artists
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 21:30, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

You did it twice, fix that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:10, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Whoops!! Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 00:34, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

• Mention the music video for "Control"
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 21:30, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• The composition has some information that could be used in the lead.
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 21:30, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• I see some sources stating this as the debut EP on the review section?
  • Those sources are incorrect. Disclosure had a previous EP called Carnival released in July 2011 editorEهեইдအ😎 21:30, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Composition

• "fuses together styles" → fuses the styles
  •  Done editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• "critic described" → critic, described
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• Glenn Jackson → in between commas
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• "Jacques Greene, backing the tight, wordless alto vocals of Sinéad Harnett" → what are you trying to say here?
  • Less confusing description added editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• "Globular house" keyboard → "Globular house" features keyboard
  • That's not a song title, that's a quote from a review to describe an instrument from the opening track. editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• and "spacey," "sun-bleached" synthesizers. → remove the comma
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• "With its main instrumental element identical to that of the beginning of "What's in Your Head", "Control"" → "Control", with its main instrumental element identical to that of the beginning of "What's in Your Head" + put the reference in the end of the sentence.
  •  Done editorEهեইдအ😎 14:48, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Release and promotion

• Was "boiling" a single? The source says "Here's a cut from that release", it doesn't state radio dates or anything else.
  • A single doesn't necessarily have to be released to radio be considered a "single". And besides, the source shows the single's official artwork. So, yeah, it kind of makes sense. editorEهեইдအ😎 21:32, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Thanks.  Done

Critical reception

• Beats per Minute and Pretty Much Amazing respectively → Beats per Minute and Pretty Much Amazing, respectively
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• Edmunds said that → where is he from?
  • Read the composition section and you'll find his name. I'm pretty sure its Wikipedia policy you only mention his full name once and then only mention his last name the rest of the time. editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
    • Yes, it is. But has you can see I have to read that and you just went on and addressed this issues. It's fine, though. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:12, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• future holds for them," → future holds for them",
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• are coming up from behind." → are coming up from behind".
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• meteoric." → same as previous mistake
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• your lungs." → find out the mistake
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• The second paragraph has the same errors, so you know what you have to do.
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• the tracks: → the tracks, stating
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• Link SBTRKT
  • It is. editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• he disliked → seems to informal
  • Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Track listing and credits

• All track → All tracks
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• Additional writing credits are noted. → source?
  • Tracklisting is already cited to cite the additional writers. editorEهեইдအ😎 22:15, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Release history

• Fine

References

• Flawless.

Overall GA review

• You must add the artist template at the bottom and the name of this EP.
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 22:17, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
  • @MarioSoulTruthFan: All comments have been addressed or responded to editorEهեইдအ😎 22:20, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
• @EditorE: you really have to wait. Tomorrow I will finish this review.
  • Thanks!! I appreciate the comments and I'm looking forward to improving the article further :) editorEهեইдအ😎 00:30, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• @EditorE: please address the last issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:38, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
• @MarioSoulTruthFan: Done editorEهեইдအ😎 14:49, 9 July 2016 (UTC)