Talk:The Execution of All Things
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Whup66 in topic Minor composition complaint
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Minor composition complaint edit
Unfortunately while the article does highlight some of the elements of the record, it is written flatly with static sentence structure tied together by “also” and other weak/tedious transitions. Whup66 (talk) 14:36, 20 October 2021 (UTC)