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Book review edit
This reads like a professional review published in a magazine or even on a book jacket. Although it is very clever as written, I think it needs to be edited down to the bare essentials. And more detail as to why the journey was perilous. Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 03:33, 23 March 2015 (UTC)