Talk:The Doctor's Carriage/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:47, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

Another one for today JAGUAR  19:47, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "one of whom is blind. Max becomes ill and dies and without a mother to raise them" - how about one of whom is blind. Max becomes ill and shortly dies, leaving his children without a mother.
• Nothing on production in the lead
• "The role of the cameraman was uncredited in 1910 productions" - all of them?
• "Cast in the starring role is Marie Eline as the little girl" - which little girl? The blind one?
• "Even the reviewer of The New York Dramatic Mirror offered praise for Marie Eline's acting ability in particular" - just "the reviewer" should be fine

References

• No dead links, and all the references are formatted correctly

Close - promoted

I think I'll promote this one now, it looks well researched and good to go. The points above were so minor that it wouldn't have been helpful to stall this. Well done JAGUAR  09:52, 6 June 2015 (UTC)