Talk:The Death of Captain Marvel
 | The Death of Captain Marvel is currently a Language and literature good article nominee. Nominated by Thebiguglyalien (talk) at 18:54, 12 January 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: 1982 graphic novel |
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Nominator: Thebiguglyalien (talk · contribs) 18:54, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 22:44, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | I reviewed the top matches found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector. No concerns. Matches are titles, names, or phrases acceptable per WP:LIMITED such as "The arrival of Drax the Destroyer" and "Mar-Vell breaks the news to" |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | FUR for the cover image. Starlin image is CC and the Ars moriendi image is CC. |
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Plot summary
- Optionally, consider varying the start of paras (Mar-Vell records/Mar-Vell records/Mar-Vell asks)
- I was wondering whether it would be helpful to have brief intros to Thanos, Yon-Rogg, etc in the text, but that might make it awkward to read. I suppose that most readers will assume correctly the type of characters that are mentioned.
- Is it worth adding something about what nega-bands are?
Creation
- The link for Critical Survey of Graphic Novels: Heroes & Superheroes is to Vol 2, but I think the relevant article is in Vol 1.
Themes
Reception and legacy
Lead