Talk:The Crystal Empire/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:00, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a short description and move the "use mdy dates" template below the hatnote (WP:ORDER).

•  Done

• "animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" → "animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" – (WP:SEAOFBLUE)

•  Done

• Plot section: Part one is 397 words and part two is 372 so this passes MOS:TVPLOT.
• "with a dark magic which disables" → "with dark magic that disables"

•  Done

• Remove the comma after "Twilight jumps for the Heart".

•  Done

• Remove the comma after "King Sombra's attacks".

•  Done

• "putting needs of others" → "putting the needs of others"

•  Done

• The caption for the image in #Production is kinda long and mostly unsourced.

• Shortened and added source

• "to imply him as a once-powerful ruler" → "to imply he was a once-powerful ruler"

•  Done

• Archive sources (you can use this automatic tool).

•  Done

• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:10, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for your comments, Some Dude From North Carolina. I have hopefully addressed your comments and if there are any other changes you'd like me to make, please feel free to let me know! Pamzeis (talk) 01:40, 24 July 2021 (UTC)