Talk:The Chronicles of Life and Death/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:17, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Fine

Lead

• Over half of the album's material was written by twin brothers Benji and Joel Madden → Over half of the album's material was written by Benji and Joel Madden (is not in the body of the article, so shouldn't be here)
• and a bonus track. → which verions?

Both versions include bonus tracks. Yeepsi (talk) 08:32, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Made clear they were diferent. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:25, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

• In the first few months of 2005, "I Just Wanna Live" was released as a single, tours of Japan → In ealy 2005, "I Just Wanna Live" was released as a single and tours of Japan
• critics → music critics + wikilink

 Done

Background and production

• The strings, conducted by David Campbell, played arrangements he composed with Valentine → The strings conduction and arrangements were done by David Campbell, along with Valentine on the latter composition.

 Done

Composition

• Piano ballad "The Truth" → The piano ballad "The Truth"
• to the Cure → to The Cure's sound

Should be lowercase T per MOS:THEMUSIC. Yeepsi (talk) 08:32, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

• If you find something in the reviews on the talk page regarding tracks such as "It Wasn't Enough", "Secrets" or others not cited please add

Couldn't find anything useful for "Mountain", "It Wasn't Enough" or "In This World (Murder)". Yeepsi (talk) 08:46, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done

Release

• Fine

Touring

• leading to a performance at AOL Music Live in New York → when?
• The TV performances should include which songs

I would but the song titles aren't mentioned in the sources. Yeepsi (talk) 08:32, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

• 2004 appeareances in one paragraph and the 2005 in other

 Done

Critical response

• Seems fine.

Commercial performance and legacy

• I will fix this section it is easier for me.

 Done

Track listing

• Fine

Personnel

• Fine

Weekly charts

• Fine

Year-end charts

• US Billboard 200 Year-end Chart → US Billboard 200
• Do the same for the other, it is redudent as we know it from the title.

 Done

Certifications

• Fine

References

• Fine

External links

• The official one is on their channel 1

 Not done

Missed this, done it now. Yeepsi (talk) 15:36, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

• Three reliable sources that can be used to improve the article.
• You can address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:16, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Done. Yeepsi (talk) 08:59, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

@Yeepsi: You need a date for the Japanese Albums, otherwise it is a dead link. Once you do it, it will be a GA. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:14, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Done. Had to convert to cite web template since it kept linking to a deadlink regardless of date. Yeepsi (talk) 18:31, 13 April 2020 (UTC)