Talk:The Beautiful World of Jeffree Star/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

Review

• Is there a better reference than this one? If not, please archive it through the Wayback Machine in case it changes.
  • I added a Wayback Machine archive url.
• Reference 32 seems unneeded (see Wikipedia:Citation overkill)
  • I deleted it.
• Is there a better reference than the video itself to cite for the claim "Time of the Season" by The Ben Taylor Band served as the theme song of the series."
  • Not particularly, but there is a Reddit thread stating it was "Time of the Season"; however, Reddit isn't a credible source. It's listed in the Spotify playlist also referenced in the article.
• Reference 12 is from May but is sourced for a claim for November. Can you find an updated reference?
  • The claim from November is no longer accurate since James Charles has since recoved from the 3 million subscriber drop. I reworded the sentence to make sense for the claim in May.
• Reference 42 does not support its claim. It just shows it was trending, not that it "peaking at #1 for seven hours and staying within the top ten for fourteen hours."
  • I changed the wording to "became the #1 trending topic for several hours", which can clearly be seen in the source.

• @HickoryOughtShirt?4: I will requested for a copyedit to be done on this page in order to better the prose. Jayab314 13:20, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

• Jayab314, thanks. Honestly, this is an easy pass. Just let me know when the copyedit is done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:35, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

• @HickoryOughtShirt?4: The copyedit is done. Jayab314 12:55, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

• Thanks and congrats! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:16, 26 April 2020 (UTC)