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"Lindolfo Chaves is the president of a tobacco company based in Havana," - more concise president of a Havana-based tobacco company
"his doctor diagnoses him with a heart murmur" - what type of heart murmur?
"his uncle's arrival comes at a bad time for Ruperto: " - try not to use word such as "at a bad time"
"with the help of Sócrates, Ruperto's butler," - how about with the help of Ruperto's butler Sócrates instead?
"the three characters play out the farce in front of Uncle Lindolfo. Lindolfo believes the ruse" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
"Colmenares writes (in 1999 and 2005) that" - I don't feel that the parentheses are needed as it looks like a sidenote instead
"Azuaga García also notes that That's the Woman I Want is, along with The Yacht Isabel Arrived This Afternoon, "the most representative," - The Yacht Isabel Arrived This Afternoon are "the most representative,"
"In 2009, Colmenares looked at the credits of the film," - more formal; observed
Thank you a detailed review - I think I've done everything except the heart murmur, which the film only calls a heart murmur. Kingsif (talk) 17:18, 8 April 2020 (UTC)Reply