Talk:Tewolde Berhan Gebre Egziabher
Latest comment: 10 years ago by 68.188.101.149 in topic Biased/peacock words
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Biased/peacock words
editThis article reads like a public relations puff piece, using colorful but subjective characterizations throughout.
- "which is effectively that country's Ministry of the Environment." It is what it is. This further characterization adds nothing to understanding the function of the organization.
- "put much of his energy" A clearly subjective description.
- "a strong group of well-prepared African negotiators who began to take the lead" Peacock words.
- "united, strong, progressive positions" Reflects a judgment on the nature of the positions taken without stating what the positions are.
- "protects biosafety and biodiversity" Evaluates the expected results rather than explaining the actions taken. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.188.101.149 (talk) 16:55, 3 October 2013 (UTC)