Talk:Terropterus/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Simongraham in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 19:12, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
edit- "more sparse " – consider rewording as some people prefer "sparser".
- changed "arranged in a more sparse manner" to "arranged more sparsely". Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
- In the lead, it states that the species is the only mixopterid known from Gondwana while the body states that it is "the first known mixopterid from the southern continent of Gondwana". Please clarify.
- It basically means the same thing - it's the first one to be discovered from Gondwana, so is also the only one known so far. I've changed things around so that it now just goes with "only one known" in both places. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
- Link carapace, family, genus and phylogenetic.
- Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
- @Ichthyovenator: Thank you for making these amendments. The article is now ready to review. simongraham (talk) 13:15, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Assessment
edit- Comprehension: The comprehension is good. Undetermined
- Verifiability: The article is verifiable. Pass
- Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive. Pass
- Neutrality: The article is neutral. Pass
- Stability: The article is stable. Pass
- Illustration: The article is well illustrated. Pass
- Overall: Pass/fail. Pass
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(a) (prose) | The prose is generally clear, concise and understandable. | Pass |
(b) (MoS) | The article is compliant with the manual of style. | Pass |
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(a) (major aspects) | The article broadly covers all major aspects. | Pass |
(b) (focused) | The article is focused without unnecessary deviations. | Pass |
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The article is compliant with the policy on neutral point of view. | Pass |
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No ongoing content disputes or edit wars present. | Pass |
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Congratulations, Ichthyovenator. The article meets the criteria to be a Good Article. | Pass |
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