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I was wondering if someone could change the search for "Tabula Rusa" to a general page that included this episode of "Lost" and a link to "John Locke", the philosopher who made this phrase famous with his ontological arguments. It would be much more useful for people wishing to learn about philosophy and less based on pop culture. Thank you.
136.167.131.13 (talk) 23:34, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 18:40, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
- Lead
- "Jack later tells Kate that the past does not matter, they all died when the plane crashed." --> what?
- "decides to end the marshal's misery by shooting him in the heart." --> remove the verbose. I think it's best to say "decides to kill the Marshal by shooting him in the heart" or something.
- "He misses and punctures the marshal's lung, putting him in even more pain" use a full stop there.
- "The episode is called this" --> "The episode received this name"
- All done! Thanks @Igordebraga:! -Newyorkadam (talk) 01:16, 20 March 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam
I fixed the lead and Production, can you continue the review, @Hahc21:? igordebraga ≠ 13:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)