Talk:TNA World Beer Drinking Championship
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 19:31, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- ok, I'll review it shortly. MathewTownsend (talk) 19:31, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:
- "and Young took the championship with him, having apparently won it" - took the championship, like walking out the door with it?
- I rewrote sentence, but yep that's pretty much the point. Storm passed out, so he won. Picked up the title and walked away.--WillC 22:39, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- "The first round was a "never have I ever" round" - what is this?
- Sadly, this was a time when TNA wrote some of the dumbest stuff. Its a skit. They are playing beer games. I tried to explain what was going on better.--WillC 22:39, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- "The second round was contested with both participants having beer bottles taped to their hands and neither being allowed to go to the bathroom. - what's happening here. I don't get it.
- Extension of the skit. They were trying to be funny.--WillC 22:39, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- "Young won after Storm wet himself, which was confirmed by the newly named Jackie Moore". - "wet" as in peeing? Who is Jackie Moore?
- Yes, exactly. I felt it sounded better than peeing. Ms. Jackie renamed. I explained that better.--WillC 22:39, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- "after interference from Rhino" - what is "interference" here?
- "Storm won the bout after Moore retrieved the championship for him without the referee seeing" - explain? What didn't the referee see?
- B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
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- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Provides references to all sources:
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- C. No original research:
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- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Main aspects are addressed:
- B. Remains focused:
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- Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
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- Also, I made some edits which you should check for accuracy - that I didn't inadvertently introduce error.[1]
- I will put this on hold so you can respond.
MathewTownsend (talk) 21:24, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Reply
- just one more qurestion: "The first round was a "never have I ever" round, in which the participants had to admit to experiences they had never been involved in. If the opponent had partaken in a similar action he was forced to drink a shot." Do you mean that if the westler had never had the experience, but his oponent has, then the oponent is forced to drink another shot? MathewTownsend (talk) 22:54, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, best way I know how to word it currently.--WillC 23:21, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Reevaluation after fixes
- 1. Well written?: Pass
- 2. Factually accurate?: Pass
- 3. Broad in coverage?: Pass
- 4. Neutral point of view?: Pass
- 5. Article stability?: Pass
- 6. Images?: Pass
Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 23:26, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for passing and reviewing this article.--WillC 23:28, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
The article may be good but the subject is stupid. Radio Sharon (talk) 14:26, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
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editCan Anyone be able to find a fair use image of the belt (WorldSeriesOfPoker500 (talk) 14:44, 24 March 2012 (UTC))
- Insignificant title overall, with it mostly being a comedy prop. A fair use image in this point would be pointless.--WillC 10:05, 25 March 2012 (UTC)