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A fact from Syncletica of Alexandria appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 April 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that Syncletica of Alexandria, a 4th-century saint and Desert Mother, was called "an upper-class girl who does not care about her body"?
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... that Syncletica of Alexandria, a 4th-century saint and Desert Mother, was called "an upper-class girl who does not care about her body"? Source: Fabrizio Petorella (2019). "The True Disciple of the Blessed Thecla: Saint Syncletica and the Construction of Female Asceticism", Adamantius, Vol. 25, p. 418.
ALT1: ... that in the writings and sayings of Syncletica of Alexandria, a 4th-century saint and Desert Mother, were full of metaphors about sailing and the sea? Source: Tim Vivian (2019). "'We Sail by Day': Metaphor and Exegesis in the Sayings of Amma Syncletica of Egypt". Cistercian Studies Quarterly. Vol. 54, No. 1, p. 6
Other problems: - Not a problem per se, but are most of these sources offline? (See below). Additionally, one sfn for Wheeler cites a page 75 that does not exist; and Petorella is duplicated in whole inline as well as in the Works cited list.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Overall: Nice article overall, beautifully thorough inline citations. I performed some copyediting. QPQ done and already in prep, nomination came before backlog mode was implemented. Out of the two hooks, I prefer ALT0, although I wonder if there's an issue with switching from past tense to present in the direct quote. ALT1 also approved, but needs to remove the word "in".
AGF'ing for offline sources. I'm assuming you accessed Alciati 2019, Petorella 2019, Vivian 2019 and 2020, and Wheeler 2014 offline? Of course, nothing wrong with this, but if they were accessed online (even if paywalled) they should be cited as such. I did find all of them in online databases through The Wikipedia Library and at least Vivian's are open-access, so would be good to link where possible.
Also worth adding: Baring-Gould mentions "consumption in the lungs" (i.e. tuberculosis) contributed to her death. Additionally, Veder 2006 and Dunbar 1901 both describe the "cell" she lived in instead as a literal "tomb"; that's worth looking into to verify which one it was, if possible, and could make another great alt hook. Your call though—as you're certainly no stranger to these antiquity biographies, I trust your judgment! –TCMemoire18:39, 1 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
@TCMemoire: thanks for your review, I will try to respond to your concerns and questions. Re: the hooks: While the tenses aren't technically grammar errors, I agree that it reads rough. How about this slight tweak: ALT0a: ... that Syncletica of Alexandria, a 4th-century saint and Desert Mother, is called "an upper-class girl who does not care about her body"?
Yes, all the sources you mention were found online, although they were paywalled, accessed with a WP Library account. It's been my practice to not include links to paywalled sources because they aren't easily accessible, but I'm not unopposed to following your suggestion. Just added URLs and access dates.
I added the clarification about Syncletica's death; see about the middle the final paragraph, ref9. The words "cell" and "tomb" are interchangeable; they both mean the very small living space where ascetics lived. I made the editorial choice to use "cell" because it's more understandable for the modern reader.