Talk:Syeda Ummehani Ashraf

Latest comment: 11 years ago by MrNiceGuy1113 in topic Copyedit Tag

Copyedit Tag

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Hi, I have given the article a copyedit tag, mostly due to the repetition of "She" at the start of each sentences which generally is seen as a poor use of English.

Regards, (MrNiceGuy1113 (talk) 05:59, 5 November 2012 (UTC))Reply