Talk:Sweet Evening Breeze

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Gabrielbodard in topic Confusing wording

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk22:37, 1 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Moved to mainspace by Wcbenge22 (talk). Nominated by SL93 (talk) at 02:07, 11 June 2022 (UTC).Reply

  •   Moved to mainspace on 11 June, nom same day-new enough; 2322 char-long enough; neutral; cited; no image. No apparent copyvios, but note that half of the sources cannot be reviewed as are off-line. Hook 124 char, under maximum; interesting; cited though source is off-line-AGF. QPQ done. SusunW (talk) 18:26, 18 June 2022‎ (UTC)Reply

Confusing wording

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I have tweaked the word order because "fellow teenage aspiring drag queen" is confusing/misleading given that Sweets was presumably around 70 years old by this time. I'm not happy with "teenage fellow" as a fix though. Can anyone improve? Gabrielbodard (talk) 08:35, 10 July 2022 (UTC)Reply