Talk:Sustainable diet/Archive 1
It will be better to remove the sections: Definition of a sustainable diet and define the term in your lead section as it is an overview of the topic. Hananbechir (talk) 19:20, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
Why so much on health? edit
This article seems to heavily conflate the health benefits of diets with the environmental benefits of diets. In the interest if WP:BOLD I'm going to clean it up. McKay (talk) 16:58, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
Comments on Neutrality edit
The article points to a topic that is widely discussed and referenced, yet there are suggestions within the text where the opinion, due to use of language and referencing, is not completely neutral.
Definition of Sustainable Diet edit
It would be helpful for those interested in bettering this article to define, from at least two points of view, the meaning of Sustainable Diet in the Lead. The lead as of now suggest possible POV.
Sources and Sections edit
There is no reference as of now made to the many types of diets that exist in the world and how other worldly factors, within food consumption, contribute to the topic on sustainability. There are sources from news pages that would be best to replace with other sources that directly reference studies that have been made so far. studentlearning 19:57, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
Issues of a Sustainable diet edit
Reading this topic for the first time, it was a bit confusing what are the issues of a sustainable diet. There are problems of consumption, but if there could be some real life examples brought it, it would help put the topic in context. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Salinatam (talk • contribs) 15:45, 24 February 2017 (UTC)