Talk:Sustainable Development Goal 15

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 2402:8100:39C3:70E5:A473:E31C:E368:D672 in topic Life on land

Target 15.2 edit

It's missing!

Do we really want to list all targets here? edit

I am undecided if it's useful to have the entire list of targets here. I would prefer to write more in prose form. We have the link to the entire list of targets and indicators available now. Perhaps only list the main targets (which short discussions)? Also, similar question about the indicators. EMsmile (talk) 04:23, 7 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

this has now been changed. Much better now. EMsmile (talk) 14:53, 7 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

To do list edit

These are improvements that could be made if anyone has time:

  • Add some more images (Wikimedia Commons)
  • Improve captions of existing maps/images
  • Improve the flow of text in the background section because some of it reads like just a collection of facts but without good prose and flow.
  • Improve lead to make it a better summary of the article
  • Improve readability, make sentences easier to understand for laypersons.
  • Find any other good progress reports for SDG 15.
  • Provide more detail and references to the section on "linkages with other SDGs"
  • Find more progress information for some of the indicators which so far don't have progress information provided. Scour all the links on the HLPF website.
  • Add more wikilinks to other articles in Wikipedia and vice versa (link back to SDG 15 from those other articles).
  • Find Wikipedia articles that explain some of the key concepts that are used in the SDG 15 article. We should not have to created new articles - often times they exist but just under different names. EMsmile (talk) 14:10, 7 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Life on land edit

Life on land 2402:8100:39C3:70E5:A473:E31C:E368:D672 (talk) 10:58, 17 May 2022 (UTC)Reply