Talk:Superstore season 6

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Superstore (season 6)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:38, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "Promotional poster with the season premiere's original airdate." fragment, no full stop.

 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:23, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Ben Feldman doesn't need disambiguation.

 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:23, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "fictional big-box store in" seems strange to call it a "big-box store" when it's called "Superstore" so it's a superstore, right?!

Pretty sure they mean the same thing. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:24, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Nichole Sakura doesn't need to be piped to a redirect back to Nichole Sakura...

 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:25, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "Due to its impact on television in the United States, it was decided that Superstore would create episodes about the pandemic itself as a test for Universal Television." I don't follow this at all.

 Done Reworded. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:29, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "Victor Nelli, Jr." no comma.

That's how they was credited. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:33, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "missing ring" engagement?

 Done 16:34, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "Jerusha he'd avoid" avoid contractions.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "does some good things around alternative energy" rephrase using encyclopedic language.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• In fact, a lot of the synopses need to be copyedited for tone. I know it's a sitcom but these synopses need to be factual and properly written/toned.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "while they're" contraction again.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Link showrunner.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "for Universal Television to test" what do they have to do with it?

 Done Added mention that they produced the show. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:42, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• "by Thanksgiving, the" not the same date across the world, be specific.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:33, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• "table read" link.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "her [...] and " do you need those brackets?

 Done Yes since it's not the whole quote. 16:43, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "original October 22" original scheduled.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• ""episodes began airing on Thursdays" episodes aired on Thursdays

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• "beginning with its sixth" -> "from the sixth"

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• "approval rating of 92% based" but just over 50% from viewers... worth noting.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:38, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• Avoid SHOUTING IN CAPS in the ref titles.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:40, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

• Ref 22, replace spaced hyphen with en-dash.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:35, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

On hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:19, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: I think I have finished addressing all of your suggestions. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:11, 20 May 2021 (UTC)

Ok, it's fine, promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:45, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

The last show was the entire Cloud 9 staff having a barbeque at Glenn's place, having fun and remembering the good times they had together.

Meaning the last shot? Who writes these things? 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:B15D:AECD:4E4F:2846 (talk) 07:55, 3 October 2021 (UTC)

GA Reassessment

Superstore (season 6)

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Result: no consensus, defaulting to keep. lettherebedarklight, 晚安, おやすみ, ping me when replying 10:48, 13 September 2022 (UTC)

Merely a cursory glance at the page revealed examples of poor writing and misrepresenation of a web source (both present at time of original GA assessment), which I edited to fix. Reassessment required. U-Mos (talk) 07:42, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

Further issues encountered: article skims over the notable fact that departing lead actor America Ferrera not only returned to film the episode held over from the previous season, during which she departs, but filmed a further episode as well (the season premiere); currently just reads she "wrap[ped] up the storyline". Further down in the production section, a paragraph begins with confusing reference to "multiple showrunners, writers, and lead actors" (from other shows?) discussing using COVID as a narrative theme (in reference to Superstore? Or more generally? Is this backed up by the source from the subsequent sentence, which is behind a paywall?) U-Mos (talk) 08:11, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

I'm not an expert on TV articles nor this show, but this doesn't seem like an actual problem? The article says "Ferrera would return to the series for the first two episodes of the sixth season to wrap up the storyline." That doesn't seem like "skimming over" it. I'm not sure how a reader would interpret that sentence to be about showrunners and writers from other shows - that would be very strange, there's no clarification required, the default subject from context is the showrunners of Superstore (which the source confirms). Not a "confusing reference." You can get past the paywall with the archive link. The edit you made looks fine, but also doesn't look like it's revealing some deep rot that indicates everything else is broken. Maybe there are problems here, I did not extensively check the article, but if there are, they don't appear to be the ones cited above. SnowFire (talk) 14:17, 8 July 2022 (UTC)

• Keep. Seeing no further comment or expansion on problems, seems fine to me. I reserve the right to change my stance if further problems are found, but they aren't "cursory glance" problems. SnowFire (talk) 08:17, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.