Talk:Superpower (song)

Sources

• http://pitchfork.com/news/57688-beyonce-shares-behind-the-scenes-video-for-haunted-and-superpower/
• http://www.vulture.com/2013/12/beyonce-videos-easter-eggs.html
• http://www.vulture.com/2014/12/beyonce-haunted-superpower-behind-the-scenes-jonas-akerlund.html
• http://bitchmagazine.org/post/on-her-surprise-new-album-beyoncé-is-a-cultural-chameleon

---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:54, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 16:24, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• What does "co." and "v." mean?
• List the full names for the "Producers" parameter, just don't link them

Lead

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• Please insert "recorded" in between "song" and "by American recording artist..."

Background

• ""Superpower" was written by Beyoncé, Frank Ocean, Boots and Pharrell Williams with the latter also handling its production." --> Yes, this is obvious, but you need to cite this; using the album's liner notes will work just fine
• "It was recorded in three studios – Jungle City Studios, Oven Studios and Mirrorbal Studios." --> "It was recorded in three studios: Jungle City Studios, Oven Studios and Mirrorbal Studios."
• "to be a "powerful" song with strong voices. She went on..." --> "to be a "powerful" song with strong vocals; she went on..."

Composition

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• Please link "common time" to the article "Time signature#Most frequent time signatures"

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• How does she "further compares herself with a bear and a shark.[8][14]"?
• Rest is flawless (ladies); I woke up like this... I woke up like this ;)

Critical reception

• I didn't find any errors, but almost every review starts with "[Critic name] of [publication]..."; you can change it up a bit with "[Critic name], writing for [publication],..." You know what I'm saying?

Music video

• "Pharrell Williams (pictured) who served as one of the writers of the song, makes a cameo appearance in the music video" --> "Pharrell Williams (pictured) who served as one of the writers of the song, makes a cameo appearance in the music video." + Add a source backing up this statement

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• "The video for "Superpower" was released on December 13, 2013 to iTunes Store on Beyoncé itself along with sixteen other music videos for every track on the album." --> "A music video for "Superpower" was released on December 13, 2013 through the iTunes Store, in addition to a clip for every other track on the parent album."

Live performance and usage in media

• Perfect!

End of GA Review:

I appreciate all of your lengthy contributions to WP:Beyoncé! I enjoy reviewing any article regarding a song and this isn't an exception! Some short fixes and will surely pass! Great work again! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:34, 19 June 2016 (UTC).

Thank you very much again @Carbrera: for the great review (LOL for that "Flawless" joke). I think everything is  Done now. My love is love 21:48, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the quick responses. I just picked up "Partition" so see you again very soon! Carbrera (talk) 21:54, 19 June 2016 (UTC).

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