Talk:Sue Hastings

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Stepho-wrs in topic Work needed

Work needed edit

Considerable work is required to bring this article up to standard. The two biggest issues are:

  1. the references should be inline (via the <ref>...</ref> tag) so that each fact is tied to its source. I can help converting them to proper citation format but I don't know which fact goes with which reference.
  2. it should be written in the third person, not the first person. Phrases such as "I met Kathy Burks in 1975 or 1976" cannot be said in Wikipedia's voice. The style should be written in a similar manner as the Encyclopædia Britannica, rather than as a blog entry.  Stepho  talk  10:24, 31 January 2019 (UTC)Reply