Talk:Stuart M. Matlins

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Whiteguru in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Who's Who entry edit

Matlins apparently has an entry in Who’s Who in America, if someone has access to that it would be great if they could help expand the article with any information from there. Nablais (talk) 02:39, 2 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Direct Quotes edit

@Nablais:, I accepted this draft because it met the notability requirements and is overall good enough. But there is definitely more room for this article to develop. Specifically, there are a lot of direct quotes in this article from Matlins about his personal opinions. It feels like a collection of personal opinions at some points, which is not very encyclopedic. Please check out MOS:QUOTE. In addition, is he living or dead? The two citations given for his 2019 death at the start of the article don't state his death. Please also cite the one paragraph that is uncited. Thanks, Awsomaw (talk) 00:59, 19 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Feedback from New Page Review process edit

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: nice work..

Whiteguru (talk) 06:17, 25 July 2020 (UTC)Reply