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Tone edit
I can't find where it's copied from, but this article certainly has the feel of something from a sales flyer or similar. —C.Fred (talk) 18:17, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
I agree with you, now does this need to be completely rewritten or can editing save this. I'd say rewriting is needed but until then this one can remain.--Mavromatis (talk) 23:31, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
The first reference should read "http://www.parkli.com/Consulting/AppliedStrategicLeadership.cfm" - changing ASP to CFM — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dondtus (talk • contribs) 18:40, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
This is terribly written. The first couple of sections sound like some 'consultant's' blog post. - Tom.