Talk:Storm Area 51/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 04:39, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement

In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use  Done,  Fixed,  Added,  Not done,  Doing..., or  Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. —♠Vami_IV†♠ 04:39, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Background

Expand this section. When was Area 51 established, and to what end?

 Done I've added some more info relating to the site's opening and history, but let me know if you want more to be added. WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• Citation [1] is now repeated without need in the second paragraph.

 Fixed WackyWikiWoo (talk) 13:18, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• around the time the military began flying CIA U2 spy planes in the area. They would not be CIA planes if the USAF was flying them.

 Removed I've removed that part of the sentence all together, it seems sufficient to just mention UFOs were spotted at the site. WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Prose

• "Facebook event and internet meme" is the place to introduce and discuss Matty Roberts.

 Done I've moved it down to that section. WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• Add his first name, please.

 Done WackyWikiWoo (talk) 13:18, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• Oh, that's Naturo running. What's this cheek clapping the youngins are talking about?

 Done I've added an... explanation? WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:59, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Perfect, hilarious. Things like this make me wonder what aliens will think of us if they ever show up above our ball of rock. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 11:25, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

This? ◢   Ganbaruby!   (Say hi!) 13:46, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Hopefully. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 15:08, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• B-2 stealth bomber Could you make one link out of the three here?

 Done WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• Combine "Gathering" and "Music festivals"

 Done WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• The county has just 184 hotel rooms Make this past-tense.

 Done WackyWikiWoo (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

GA progress

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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