Talk:Stockton Helffrich

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Formatting - The formatting looks good; it fits well within the Wikipedia formats.

Content -Your information is clear and organized. I only made one change to the second paragraph in the career section. It’s not a grammar issue I just think the first “because” isn’t necessary. Overall your article is very interesting and it doesn’t seem like you need to make any grammar or format changes.

• Helffrich transferred from the page staff to the more wanted tour-guide position not because solely because of his height; NBC had more guide uniforms ready for long-limbed young men rather than short.

• It was the first set of guidelines he would write during his time with the network but not his last.