Talk:Stevens v Kabushiki Kaisha Sony Computer Entertainment

Question

Hi there, I am new to this, but on my page it says there is no lead section. I have put an introduction to the case above the contents - i thought that would be considered a lead section. Any advice?

Thanks

Those two first paragraphs are a decent lead. It could be improved further, but I removed the warning for that on the page. --an odd name 00:28, 17 October 2009 (UTC)

Citing sources

Please see Wikipedia:Citing sources. Don't use "ibid", "op cit" etc. Wikipedia articles are meant to be edited by multiple parties and to all the insertion of material and footnotes by people who don't necessarily understand systems which were out of fashion when I was at uni in the early 1970s.--Grahame (talk) 06:37, 18 October 2009 (UTC)

I have changed the referencing so that there are no more ibid's. Can anyone advise me on other changes needed? :) Also, i had a word limit of 2500 words- so this is meant to be a brief summary of the case. Is there anyway to change the title to mention that?

123jac123 (talk) 05:15, 6 November 2009 (UTC)

How do you mean that you have a word limit? There are no statutes like that in place on Wikipedia. Seegoon (talk) 19:31, 6 November 2009 (UTC)