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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 13:50, 10 September 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing your article.

Infobox edit

  Done

Lead edit

  • However, it was certified → However, it was only certified
  • "nd has been noted by music critics as one of her most popular tracks". → it should be in the paragraph above, not this one.
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  • Rhythm of Love Tour, On a Night Like This, Showgirl: The Homecoming Tour → year of the tours between parenthesis.
  • appearance in the 2013 film The World's End. → appearance in the British comic science fiction film The World's End.

Background and composition edit

  • Same as the first point in the infobox.
  • "Step Back in Time" was composed by Stock, Aitken and Waterman → again?
  • Water → who? You meant Waterman
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Release and reception edit

  • "The standard 12" vinyl was released worldwide, and featured the original recording, instrumental version and the Walkin' Rhythm mix; in the UK, the original recording was omitted. It was re-released as a 7" vinyl worldwide, and included the original recording and instrumental version. In November 1990, a CD single was issued by PWL Records in Japan and included the three tracks from the Australian vinyl; it was distributed worldwide that same month with the same track list. In France, a special mini CD included the original recording and instrumental version, whilst the same track list appeared on a cassette tape in Australia." → I'm having trouble following this section, needs some serious re-writing.
  • "parent album" → You should replace it by the name of the album because you don't mention it in this section.

  Done

Commercial performance edit

  • "In New Zealand, it entered at number 36 on the New Zealand Singles Chart". → redundant; ""In New Zealand, it entered at number 36 on the singles chart"
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Music video edit

  • "as she believed was the era that celebrated disco music" → as she believed that was the era that celebrated disco music.
  • he wrote → remove "he"
  • Use a synonym of "scene", set for example instead of always saying "scene"
  • remove "he believed"
  Done

Live performances edit

  • On her 2005 Showgirl: The Greatest Hits Tour in London, United Kingdom, a sample of the track was performed during her the performance of her 2000 single "Spinning Around" → On her 2005 Showgirl: The Greatest Hits Tour in London, United Kingdom, a sample of the track was sung during the performance of her 2000 single "Spinning Around".
  • Use sing or any other word instead of performance so many times.
  • The same goes for tour, use show, circuit....
  Done

Other uses and appearances edit

  • I'm not sure about the usage of that table, can you show me other articles using such table? I would rather have that in prose, seems just to much.
  Done. Changed to columns instead; having paraphrased them or put them into sentences would be too long, and Wikipedia advised not to use more than five citations within one sentence.
It's better definitely, however not my cup of tea.

"Step Back in Time" has appeared on numerous greatest hits compilation albums conducted by Minogue, including Greatest Hits (1990) and Ultimate Kylie (2004). Alongside, the track has been remixed by different producers and musicians, and have been listed in remix albums by Minogue including Kylie's Remixes: Vol. 2 (1992) and twice on her Greatest Remix Hits 3 (1998). Issued by numerous labels such as PWL, Mushroom, and Warner Music Australia, the list below is a detailed format of the appearances of "Step Back in Time" on Minogue's official compilation albums. →

"Step Back in Time" has appeared on numerous greatest hits compilation albums, throughout the years, conducted by Minogue, including Greatest Hits (1990), Ultimate Kylie (2004) and K25 Time Capsule (2012). Alongside, the track has been remixed by different producers and musicians, and have been listed in remix and greatest hits albums by Minogue, with the Walkin' Rhythm mix included in Kylie's Remixes: Vol. 2 (1992) and two Greatest Remix Hits volumes; an extended version of the record presented on the Singles Collection (1990) and the fourth Greatest Remix Hits, the last of Minogue's series of remixes albums, issued in 1998 and the Harding/Curnow Remix, which appears on Greatest Remix Hits 3 (1998). They were issued by numerous labels such as PWL, Mushroom, and Warner Music Australia.

  Done the adjustments to this section, but I left the list so I can find another alternative way. I probably will remove it, but just letting you know in advance.

Format and track listings edit

  • Use  – (click to copy and edit)

Credits and personnel edit

  • Use  – (click to copy and edit)
  • Link mixing, engineer and packaging design
  Done

Charts edit

Weekly charts edit

  • Switzerland is linking to some other song.
  Done

Year-end charts edit

  • Not on citation given the UK peak.
  Done

Certifications edit

  • Fine.

References edit

  • Ref. 21 is dead.
  Done
  • Kylie Minogue's official website → noitalic
  • Ref 1 → same as previous
  • Same for google books, iTunes, Digital Spy, record labels...easy if it's not a journal such as New York Times, Guardian, books and so on you don't italicize.
  • You can't use setlistfm, it's not reliable...find another.
  Done. PLUS, thank you for telling me about the italicizing part; I was previously advised by other Wikipedians to keep it italized, but I knew it wasn't right.
Well, this is the way I have seen done in FA articles and I keep it in the F«GA articles as well. Keep up the good work.

External links edit

  • Fine.

Overall GA review edit

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