Talk:Standing asanas/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:21, 26 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Many thanks as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:29, 26 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Criteria edit

1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments edit

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  • " Gheranda Samhita" should probably be italicized in all instances, as it's the name of a book. Also, the use of diacritic marks should be consistent
Done.
  • "Gheranda Samhita II.27" - Sometimes you use Arabic numerals to represent this such as 2.36, while other times, you use the Roman numerals. If this is the same section, it should be consistent
Good catch. Sorted.
  • B. K. S. Iyengar is a duplink
Fixed.
  • Krishnamacharya is a duplink, both in the shortened form and in his full name later.
Fixed.
  • Vinyasas is a duplink
Fixed.

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  • Can citation(s) be added to the table, especially for the English names, described by, and dates?
Added.
  • "It is described in the 17th century hatha yoga text Gheraṇḍa Saṃhitā 2.36." - Doesn't seem to be in the citation, although I may have missed it
What you've quoted is the citation... I've repeated the ref to the online version for you.
  • Refs 16-19 need accessdate
Done.
  • I went ahead and fixed the dashes
Many thanks.
  • If locations are known for the books, that would be nice to add, but not a big deal
Rather not, thanks.

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Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 16:22, 27 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 01:15, 28 April 2020 (UTC)Reply