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Latest comment: 3 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented.

Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.^[1]
say that the construction of the new part of hte hospital is complete.

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--AnneGartner (talk) 08:42, 5 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestions. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, the claim that your hospital network is the largest in Australia needs to supported by an independent source. I can't just take your organization's word for it. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better.

Your second edit request is

Done. Although you did not provide a citation, I was able to find one for you. Best, Altamel (talk) 19:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Talk page watchers, please see a relevant discussion at WP:COIN. Altamel (talk) 19:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

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