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Latest comment: 7 years ago4 comments3 people in discussion
The recent contributions by User:196.15.183.91 is all WP:ORIGINAL RESEARCH, wikipedia editors are not allowed to write from their own knowledge. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, wikipedia editors can only report what is written in verifiable, reliable and independent (preferably secondary) WP:SOURCES, and we have to WP:Say where you got it, in other words we have to provide WP:CITATIONS that readers of the article can refer to. Please improve all the content you have added, by removing WP:ORIGINAL RESEARCH and by providing WP:CITATIONS for what remains. Wayne Jayes (talk) 11:22, 29 September 2016 (UTC)Reply
It's also written in unacceptable "direct speech" style "when you enter" "you see the" as well as a lot of peacockery. I'm very tempted to delete the whole section, but will defer to other opinions. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 08:25, 18 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
Axxter99 (talk) 08:40, 18 October 2016 (UTC)