Talk:St. Elmo (secret society)/Archive 1
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"the building"
The "History" section of this article is incoherent.
The sentence
"Like the other Sheffield Societies, the building was once populated by admitted members from the sophomore, junior, and senior classes, who maintained separate residential quarters within the tomb."
contains the first reference to "the building" and indeed the first occurrence in the article of the word "building".
At least part of the following section should precede this sentence, or the content of the "History" section should be revised to relegate references to "the building" to the following section. Dagme (talk) 19:36, 5 February 2011 (UTC)
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