Talk:Spider (roller coaster)
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Themeparkgc in topic Neutrality
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Neutrality edit
This needs to be completely re-written. The manual of style warns against using exclamation marks in an encyclopedic article. This article also doesn't cite sources. —Joshua Scott (LiberalFascist) talk 00:41, 15 March 2010 (UTC)
- I have rewritten the article, removing some plainly false (The Spider was far from the first spinning coaster in North America) and unverified information. As such I have removed the NPOV and Wikify templates, but have left the unreferences template in place. Porlob (talk) 19:11, 4 October 2010 (UTC)
- I have cited RCDB as a source however this article still needs more. Therefore I have modified unreferenced to refimprove and updated the day to this month. Themeparkgc Talk 22:16, 4 October 2010 (UTC)