Talk:SpiceJet/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:08, 7 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:08, 7 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Lead edit

  • Looking at the article size it would be good to have two good paras in the lead covering everything. Y
  • Hooray! No duplinks in this article. Y
  • Link India Y
  • fourth largest airline in India say "in the country" so as not to repeat "India". Y

History edit

  • S K Modi "S. K. Modi" Y
  • operations as SpiceJet Why is SpiceJet in italics here but nowhere else? Y
  • suffered from a loss Remove "from" Y
  • In 2012, Kalanithi Maran Is it not "Kalanidhi"? Y
  • On 17 December 17 2014 Typo? Y
  • the airline's founder Ajay Singh No need to identify him again. Y
  • As of January 2016, it was the fourth largest airline No newer figures? The "was" makes it appear like there have been new developments. Y

Corporate affairs and identity edit

  • Ajay Singh serves as the Managing Director of the airline Since when? Y
  • with reducing sizes "in the order of their reducing sizes" Y

Destinations edit

  • After completing 5 years of flying "five" as per the MOS. Y
  • SpiceJet announced that Rajiv Gandhi International Airport, Hyderabad as the primary base "would serve as the primary base". Y

Fleet edit

  • Spice Jet ordered another 30 Boeing "SpiceJet" Y

Copyvio possibility edit

Check the details here. Y

@Magentic Manifestations: How exactly do you respond to this? Who seems to have copied whom? Sainsf <^>Feel at home

Sainsf, about three paras are showing as common between the link and the page. Firstly, the first two paras which are the lead para and services were added by myself in its current state when I started editing the article towards GA. Secondly, the link is dated 5 April 2016 while the content existed since March 2016 in the article.Magentic Manifestations (talk) 19:38, 12 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, it's best to clarify points when we are dealing with something serious like copyvio. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 02:59, 13 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Sources: No ISSN needed in ref. 24 Y

That should be all. A nice article! These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:30, 7 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

@Sainsf: All done! Thanks!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 19:09, 12 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
@Magentic Manifestations: Happy to promote now. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 02:59, 13 April 2016 (UTC)Reply