Talk:Soviet destroyer Sposobny (1970)/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by L293D in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: L293D (talk · contribs) 23:56, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
Will do. L293D (☎ • ✎) 23:56, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
Image review edit
- File:BPK61Strogiy1985.jpg is in Russian and looks out of place on the en.wiki article. I don't know if you speak Russian, but maybe you could take File:Strogiy.jpg and redo the notations in English.
- Working on it.
Source review edit
- All sources look reliable, though of course I can't check even the online ones.
Lead edit
The ship served during the Cold War from 1971.
- This sentence is a bit short, could you add when it stopped serving in the Russian navy? This would read like "The ship served during the Cold War from 1971 to 1995"
- Added end date.
They were the first class designed to survive a nuclear explosion
- Were they the first class of ships in the world designed to survive a nuke? Or the first in Russia?
- Clarified
- Link relevant article for the fall of the Soviet Union.
- Done
Construction and Service edit
- Link relevant article for the fall of the Soviet Union.
- Done.
GA Progress edit
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